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membership/tiers.eom.json

@@ -6,10 +6,9 @@
     "price_label": "$4 USD / month",
     "usd_amount": "4.00",
     "group_dn": "cn=Level 1,ou=Members,dc=eom,dc=dev",
-      "description": "Kick off the experiment with a private place to connect and a closer look at what is being made.",
+      "description": "Go beyond the public feed.",
       "benefits": [
-        "Exclusive members-only content on Discourse and Matrix",
-        "Behind-the-scenes notes and work-in-progress updates",
+        "Exclusive Discourse and Matrix content, including work-in-progress updates",
         "Giveaways exclusive to Bronze members",
         "Optional credit on the community supporters page"
       ]
@@ -21,12 +20,11 @@
     "price_label": "$8 USD / month",
     "usd_amount": "8.00",
     "group_dn": "cn=Level 2,ou=Members,dc=eom,dc=dev",
-      "description": "Venture behind the scenes and explore new experiments before their public release.",
+      "description": "Try new work before release.",
       "benefits": [
         "Bronze content and community benefits",
         "Giveaways exclusive to Silver members",
-        "Early previews of music, games, videos and experiments when available",
-        "Invitations to member playtests and listening sessions"
+        "Early previews, playtests and listening sessions when available"
       ]
   },
   "level-3": {
@@ -36,7 +34,7 @@
     "price_label": "$16 USD / month",
     "usd_amount": "16.00",
     "group_dn": "cn=Level 3,ou=Members,dc=eom,dc=dev",
-    "description": "Bring your perspective and help shape the next community experiment.",
+    "description": "Help shape the next experiment.",
     "benefits": [
       "Silver content and community benefits",
       "Giveaways exclusive to Gold members",
@@ -51,13 +49,11 @@
     "price_label": "$32 USD / month",
     "usd_amount": "32.00",
     "group_dn": "cn=Level 4,ou=Members,dc=eom,dc=dev",
-    "description": "Support the platform and help guide its direction through exclusive polls.",
+    "description": "Have a voice in the platform's direction.",
     "benefits": [
       "Gold content and community benefits",
       "Giveaways exclusive to Platinum members",
-      "Exclusive polls on the direction of the platform",
-      "A larger contribution toward servers and public projects",
-      "Choose this level if you would like to give more"
+      "Exclusive platform-direction polls"
     ]
   },
   "level-5": {
@@ -67,13 +63,11 @@
     "price_label": "$64 USD / month",
     "usd_amount": "64.00",
     "group_dn": "cn=Level 5,ou=Members,dc=eom,dc=dev",
-    "description": "Help underwrite the public work and the community around it.",
+    "description": "Give the independent work its biggest boost.",
     "benefits": [
-      "Gold content and community benefits",
+      "Platinum content and platform-direction polls",
       "Giveaways exclusive to Diamond members",
-      "Exclusive polls on the direction of the platform",
-      "Optional Diamond credit on the supporters page",
-      "Your biggest boost for independent public projects"
+      "Optional Diamond credit on the supporters page"
     ]
   }
 }